Zora Neale Hurston uses wind as a symbol to personify the power of a higher being over people and nature. Hurston does this to express the futility of humans trying to be in power, because the higher power will always be in control of their fate.
This is a lot like my thesis statement! But I said that the sun was Hurston's way of implying the presence of a higher power. I like how concise yours is, yet you still get the point across. Nice job :)
I agree with Maddie. I think it's concise and straight to the point. However, would it be more concise to say "a higher being's power over..."? It's good regardless.
This these totally makes sense. I how how you said that humans know that a higher power decides their fate in the end. That's an interesting take on the idea that I hadn't noticed.
This is a lot like my thesis statement! But I said that the sun was Hurston's way of implying the presence of a higher power. I like how concise yours is, yet you still get the point across. Nice job :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Maddie. I think it's concise and straight to the point. However, would it be more concise to say "a higher being's power over..."? It's good regardless.
ReplyDeleteThis these totally makes sense. I how how you said that humans know that a higher power decides their fate in the end. That's an interesting take on the idea that I hadn't noticed.
ReplyDeleteI like how your thesis is clear and makes sense. It's not wordy and makes an interesting point. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like it. As the others said, it's straight and to the point. Good job!
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